Poetry Submission #1

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Spechel EDD
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Post by Spechel EDD »


I wrote this up when I got a little bored. Kind of made me compare it to the girl that ended up breaking my heart.  I wrote most of it on Valentines Day of 2002 and just now I finished up the rest of it.


 


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I never really knew you


You were just another friend


But when I got to know you,


I let my heart unbend.


I couldn't help past memories


that would only make me cry


I had to forget my first love


and give love another try


So I've fallen in love with you


and I'll never let you go


I love you more than anyone


I just had to let you know


And if you ever wonder why


I don't know what I'll say


But I'll never stop loving you


each and every day


My feelings for you will never change


Just know my feelings are true


Just remember one thing


I Love You?


 


For some reason I can't write poetically about anything other than romance.  :(  :(


mR p0t8o h3d
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Joined: Tue Sep 18, 2001 1:48 pm

Post by mR p0t8o h3d »


to much loev  :(


 


/me crie


Loneranger
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Post by Loneranger »


My love for you is clean, pure


your love for me, nothing,


unsecure


Your in my thoughts, I am not in


yours


for you to love me, would be nothing but a chore


I waste time, write poems for you


These feelings, nothing but true


Time passes, left and right


Poems, feelings, I have every night


Expressions, wanting, needing you


Knowing, wishing, it will never be true


Loving, death suicide, the only way out


The end, I have no doubt


Without you, I can't live..


What can I do, what can I give?


Not me, no I cannot be


cant you see?


not me


I love you, you cant say the same..


love is but a game..


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