Chomps' and Cat's EXCELLENT STORY!

Cat · Post by **Cat** » Mon Apr 25, 2005 5:16 am

Chomps pulled up to the driveway of his date's house. This was their first date, and she was a nice girl from Albania. Chomps could not completely remember her name, and sat in the car for several minutes before deciding upon the name "Brunton". He was visibly nervous and his teeth and braces started to chatter. He then...

Chomps · Post by **Chomps** » Mon Apr 25, 2005 5:50 am

...started taking fire from the house. Bullets cracked through his windshield as he ducked over the passenger seat, trying to make his way across and out of the car. He threw open the door and...

Cat · Post by **Cat** » Tue Apr 26, 2005 3:24 am

...crawled out of the car. He scurried away from the car and ran towards the opposite street. He looked behind him to check if everything was alright. However, due to his lack of direction, he ran into a pole. He fell onto the ground and then...

Chomps · Post by **Chomps** » Tue Apr 26, 2005 4:35 am

...passed out. Chomps came to a minute later, to see the silouette of the skinny shooter in the light from the lamp post that took Chomps down. The skinny was holding a gun and wearing a helmet. Chomps recognized him; it was M...

Cat · Post by **Cat** » Tue Apr 26, 2005 5:37 am

...ichael-Corleone. Or Private Corleone, as he knew him. Chomps instantly recognized his vicious boot camp "comrade" by his red hair and pale complexity. Chomps regained composure and looked him straight in the eye, then proceeded to run away. Chomps heard the tall man chasing after him. He decided to take a detour towards an alley, but it was no use, it was a dead end. Chomps began to shiver with fear and knew he had no hope, Michael was on his way. Chomps fell to the ground when he suddenly saw Michael jump in. Chomps held his body back when suddenly...

Chomps · Post by **Chomps** » Tue Apr 26, 2005 11:05 pm

he realized why Michael-Corleone was there. MC was back from the war and there to kill Brunton! Angered, Chomps spoke, "Who took my Brunton?" Chomps reached for his flower. "Who fround my Brunton?" As MC raised his Tommy gun, Chomps gripped his flower and...

Cat · Post by **Cat** » Tue Apr 26, 2005 11:44 pm

....handed it to Michael-Corleone. Chomps understood the pain he was going through, and he did not want to harm him. Michael-Corleone smiled and reached for the flower when...

Chomps · Post by **Chomps** » Wed Apr 27, 2005 1:17 am

...BANG. A flashbang goes off in the alleyway. It turns out Brunton's call to 911 went through and the city's SWAT team went into action. Element leader Lobster, Shep with a beanbag shotgun, and a drunk Clouser prepared to round the corner...

Cat · Post by **Cat** » Wed Apr 27, 2005 2:37 am

...and aimed at Michael-Corleone and Chomps. "FREEZE!" Lobster cried. Clouser, being the great drunk he is, mimicked him and shouted out a mumbled, "FREZEEEE..." Clouser took another swig of his Maker's Mark. Unfortunately, his senses weren't quite as keen as they were supposed to be, and accidentally pressed his trigger. A loud bang went off. Clouser hiccupped a quiet "oops" and then realized he had...

Chomps · Post by **Chomps** » Wed Apr 27, 2005 5:10 am

...no idea what was going on. Meanwhile, in the alley, Lobster and Shep continued shouting at the stunned MC to drop his weapon. He did not comply, forcing Shep to...